Retropatakha
Hyy
The widow to wife wali storyy is so beautiful and fresh concept...
As being an author myself I would like to give you some suggestions... If you would like then ... arrange the story in a way in which it doesn't feel streched... people here like intimacy more.. so yiu should have shown intimacy in ranveer and his wife... baaki emotional building is really really good... if yiu would add few intimate scenes in the story... it would boost the engagement!!
Lots of love ❤️