ShyGuySamurai

I am torn between rewriting Nagan or rewrite it after I finish the whole Broken Time Series.
          	
          	On one hand, lore in Nagan doesn’t match the rest of the series. Either that, or I can’t add the lore I want because I need to rewrite the first book for it to make sense. But if I rewrite Nagan now, it’s going to delay the final book for quite a long time.
          	
          	Thoughts? Suggestions? Preferences?

leorastars

Add a note to mention the lore your adding in and when you rewrite it you can do it in parts
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leorastars

Finish please!!! 
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Lauren__Books

Hi,I was wondering if you would be willing to read what I have thus far on the story I am working on. I would like to get some criticism and thoughts to think about as I finish the first draft.

ShyGuySamurai

@LeonaBillings Ahh sorry, I’m quite swamped with classes currently. Although, if you’re ready to start receiving critiques and feedback on your writing, I’d recommend joining a writing community.
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Johnvin_7

ShyGuySamurai

Last I heard, vote trading is against Wattpad guidelines. No thanks, I don’t feel like getting banned.
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ShyGuySamurai

I am torn between rewriting Nagan or rewrite it after I finish the whole Broken Time Series.
          
          On one hand, lore in Nagan doesn’t match the rest of the series. Either that, or I can’t add the lore I want because I need to rewrite the first book for it to make sense. But if I rewrite Nagan now, it’s going to delay the final book for quite a long time.
          
          Thoughts? Suggestions? Preferences?

leorastars

Add a note to mention the lore your adding in and when you rewrite it you can do it in parts
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leorastars

Finish please!!! 
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ShyGuySamurai

But Carvolier was no longer his home, and he was growing tired of the Council of Thirds.
          
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          The words froze Master Dagmire where he stood. He had been at war long enough to know when he shouldn’t have his back to something in the room. Every nerve in his body screamed that there was something dangerous behind him. As a visceral reaction, he twisted around, only to be met with something he never thought he would be faced with himself: the eyes of a snake.
          
          This was not the boy he taught all those years ago.
          
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          One day till