KaylaAdeline
Hey! Would you mind checking out my poetry? I’d love to hear your thoughts. Here's a quick sample, hope you have a great day! When the clock strikes midnight I will not flee the scene. I will stand before you As my dress disintegrates Into an oversized T-shirt Perfume replaced with sweat. You will choose your future At the end of the night Because I Am my own fairy godmother And I break My own spells.
Siarhei_Kandybovich
@KaylaAdeline that poem settles beautiful the anxiety of a moment. But an anxious moment that you choose where it leads next. I loved the switch from dress to oversized T-shirt and from perfume to sweat. Really sets the tone. But at the end of the poem it is a powerful statement of "I can do it. The choice is mine. And my life is mine. It's on me." That is a gorgeous poem.
•
Reply