EmpressAJellehBeans
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No, offense to my fellow mlp fan, but your story, "butcher shy" needs some editing. it's a goood storyline, But a small case of red ants in someone's books wouldn't kill them unless they were allergic, and you just said they ate twilight. Also, Fluttershy probaly wouldn't be able to kill Celestia AND luna. also, she still has to kill cadance or the crystal empire isn't open and she can't, er, shave there faces off.