I read, voted, and commented on My Bestfriend and I.
I wasn't to sure about it. The first couple chapters were just character profiles and info on them. It was an unusual way to start a story and I had to push through each chapter. I like my characters to develop as the story goes along and unveil themselves slowly. It kind of is mass bio overload by listing everything up front. (For me personally at least). However, your chapter called first kiss was tender and sweet. I really enjoyed it. I'm really looking forward to reading more after the last chapter. I'm glad I kept reading your story