derangedoatmeal

hi i was wondering if you would be willing to read the first chapter if my book! im open to criticisms of course, but please don't be too harsh cause im still new to writing. um and not that it's the main focus of the book, but my original character is south asian and speaks Hindi!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/265331404?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=refrieddeath&wp_originator=jfTwLt2yjx2Cr1IH9GD0EGpW1J%2Bh30rFzUJUAJdIp7d0TpJhl8QUrmHYuok%2FUOsicchBjK5uwOir8oZdQCjfjASY33W0DoTJaNg4DKhDv4d1jD4saKSTuzOL5fAY056w

Sidra_Vervain

Wait that’s actually rlly good sure I’ll read it
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