Thank you!! I'm glad you're enjoying it! PbF is only my third work of fiction since college (that's 25 years ago!), so I'm rather new to the whole fiction-writing thing; I'm a published editor, nonfiction writer, and poet. :) One of my essays appeared earlier this year in my favorite magazine, Victoria , so that was a wonderful rush. :) Keep on writing--I can see that you have talent; now you just need to focus on practicing. Just like a musician or visual artist, we writers need to hone our craft through constant practice (which means lots of writing!!) and lots of reading, too. So keep doing both, and I think you'll be pleased with the results.
<3, Cassandra :)