Alright, so I've had the prologue rewritten for a while, I just got a friend of mine to read it a few days ago and she liked it, so I'll do a bit more cleaning and post it later tonight.. I'm only posting the prologue tonight though, the next 4 chapters have a lot more editing and lengthening to go through, they're a bit short for my taste ^^; I hope you enjoy, it'll be up soon~! -SierraCR