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@YuffieProductions Yeah no prob! :3
          I don't think it really took away from the story. I was still surprised that he was using the chancellor, but after everything else that had happened before, I was already convinced he was the bad guy. If you think it's a problem, maybe you can make them less direct? I don't know >.>

Thanks so much for the comment! It's always nice to hear from the ghost readers. :) 
          Ah, I will go back and make the Hero death scene longer. I thought it was too quick, too. (My pacing always seems to be too fast with everything). 
          Hm, so do you think the predictable-ness took something away from the story? Should I get rid of the more obvious lines from Faye? 

@RichardStaschy Yeah no prob. And thanks for the comments on mine, I really appreciate it. :3

Thanks for reading and commenting on my story Songs of Insanity... I do enjoy the feedback... :)

@Tranquility But I'm the ghost dragon that has an orange worm that kicks! *lightning in background* And no one is more evil than meee! And hello xD