Silent-Type

@SausageBeBae  you can inbox me if you want i think it would be less confusing

LouisaDiamond

Hello. I wanted to ask if you would like to read my book, A Break In the Storm and give your comments and opinions on it and follow the story. I would like it if you gave it a try. The link is http://w.tt/1RLOqWM . I'd you feel like following me, I would love that to. Thanks for reading this. ♥

LouisaDiamond

@LouisaDiamond sadly I am a formal writer and it sucks even for me. I am changing it little by little.
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Silent-Type

@LouisaDiamond i think the writing could be a little better and it seems a little confusing with the way the people talk
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LouisaDiamond

@LouisaDiamond thanks for agreeing. Most people don't. Sadly.
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Silent-Type

@flaming_hott  Its a good idea but itll be about the third or fourth chapter cause the kidnapping gotta happen first is that coo

phosphenite

@SausageBeBae  btw how old are u and fro. were r u
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phosphenite

@SausageBeBae sorry I didn't answer directly but I have a problem withthe server
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phosphenite

@SausageBeBae  that would be such a cool idea but I don't understand way kidnapping
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Silent-Type

@flaming_hott  Id say shes a bit lik me too though I did not mean to do that. Any ideas on what I should put in the next chapter

phosphenite

@SausageBeBae  well maybe that she ran 4 bout a 2 or 3 dayz and her mate can't find her until he lost hopee that he will then for example she was lost in the would she and seth and the were attacked by rogues or maybe u could say fell in a trap for rogues in her mates territory
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