SilentStormShadow

@Samlikestoread You're welcome, I guess, sorry I didn't reply sooner

@EricVarkey My God, you can't be serious.

@EricVarkey Read her stories. You would know why I asked her to put in PERIODS in her story. She wrote whole long paragraphs with no periods until the end! AND she says her native language is English. No one commented on how she used extremely poor grammar. 
          
          Read her stories, bro. ENTIRE BOOKS like this.

@SilentStormShadow That's a really good way to look at it. (:

@Spacey You're welcome :) Giving critiques also helps with my own writing, so it's a win-win scenario.
          Plus I'd really like to know what happens next in your story.

Thanks for fanning and the constructive criticism. You're amazing. (:

They don't have burdens -_-
          Them and America shut the Chinese up when they were being oppressed

@EricVarkey "Drink", mm-hm...
          
          The picture is part of a sculpture by Kris Kuksi, I htink I told you about him before. His sculptures are amazing, look at them here: http://kuksi.com/artworks/sculpture/
          
          My profile pic is part of "The Retreat of Daphne," -- I just love the way they're both posed, it's very dramatic. I'm glad the profile pic managed to cut off the front part of the girl -- you'll see why when you look at it.
          

@EricVarkey Hmm... Photoshop, here I come! But no, I'm working on the IDs now since I just got back to my dad's. My mom's house does have computers, but the thing is they're my sisters' Macs and if they knew I touched them they'd freak out.
          
          Yeah, I don't think so, either, that your story is romanticized -- it's more like a "harsh romance", I guess you'd call it. They hate each other (for now), yet you know some bada-bing bada-boom is going to happen, but we'll see...

@EricVarkey  Well, I take that as a challenge, Mr. Eric!
          
          I`ll post stuff after finishing my history HW, but that'll be awhile from now. I'm typing on the Wii at my mom's and everything's at my dad's... [hence why im messaging on a wii in the first place]