thatdelusionalgurl_

Hi, I just read your poems and I wanted to say congrats for finding courage to start this journey. This is never going to be easy and the key is learn and understand. You have a long way to go. Don't give up!
          I don't mean to offend you or anything but I do have some suggestions for you to improve your writing and style. 
          And if you need any assistance, don't hesitate to message me after all we writers have to support each other right??
          I'll be your first follower 
          Happy writing <3

thatdelusionalgurl_

its no problem!
            Have fun writing!!!!
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Silentwhisper_9200

@thatdelusionalgurl_ 
            thankyou for letting me know... I will surely take up the guidance for my improvement thankyou for the support ❤️❤️❤️
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thatdelusionalgurl_

Sure! I would love to help
            Since this is the only way we can communicate (wattpad got rid of inbox :/ ) I want you to know that I don't mean to offend you but the main mistake you made was confusing between "your" and "you're"
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