SillyHead

@AYClaudy the name of the title says a lot haha

agatharoza

Hey, Tianna ❤️ thank you for following this not so awesome author! Now you’re one of my angels ❤️ I have no idea how on earth did you find me but YOU ARE AWESOME!!! Thank you so much for reading and voting Entwined ♡ I hope you’ll have amazing day cos you just made mine!!  It’s my baby and I really appreciate your support cos I know how it feels like to have none ♡     P.s. The second book Enamoured and spinoff Engulfed are available on Wattpad! ♡

SillyHead

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SillyHead

You are so awesome!
            I try to vote every chapter but when I’m reading I get into it and forget lol I’ll try my best to go back and vote 
            I love love love mythology so your book is right up my alley lol it was a recommended book and I’m glad because I love it so far!
            You’re a great writer! I know it says you’re editing but I didn’t want to wait lol 
            Stay golden
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SillyHead

@AYClaudy hmmmm ... I think maybe the scene towards the end where he was in the other room ... It's been a while but I think Rea heard gunshots and wasn't sure if it was him or not or if he was okay ? I'm not sure if you already have that scene in his POV ? I don't think so but it would be nice to read (:
          Can't wait til it's ready to be published

SillyHead

@AYClaudy 
          Wow that's great !
          I think it's more fitting and it makes it so that Anthony can be a character that you don't have to remove ( not that you were going to ) 
          It makes him more relevant and that's a good thing.
          I like it !

AYClaudy

@SillyHead I'm glad to know you like it better. I'm trying what I can to make it more "marketable" and my original blurb was lacking any mention of relationships... so I added them in.  Still some tweaking to do, but at least it seems like the right direction.
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roselesbian

Hey and thanks for fanning~ You liked Trapped and Running, no? Yeah, I think that story of mine is crap. .____. I shall be editing it up and what not. xD Meanwhile take a look at me other stories? They're better, specially Coterie: Requiem Within. And once again, thanks~ 
          
          I really DO need to edit T&R. o.o