FarheenayDeWierdo
hey alexia, i was reading ur book TOD, and won't lie i liked de story but the only turn off was that u used a lot more of 'bloddy' in it, i mean yano people get offended and all! and stop reading the book, which had too manu swearings!! its just a friendly advice!! Kust make sure not to use it because it looks much wierder when u read rather than saying. Just using it one or two places maybe !! But ur story is pretty good!! Just don't use the word 'bloddy' too much!! its ruining it!! ThankYou :)