I haven't starting writing yet, hopefully I do get the courage to do so someday, hopefully I get the same courage as you to be honest, you're doing great so far on your first work, short but very descriptive, which is hard for most people to do, take breaks in between updates to get a clear mind for your next chapter, and who knows, maybe you can compact those short chapters into one long on and, maybe even get more creative, there is always room for improvement when you yourself deem it necessary. Message me, or just reply to my comment on your recent chapter, I would be happy and honestly, joyful to help someone with ideas. Hopefully you can make those ideas into your own kind of version, because I know you have your own style of writing. I don't want to ruin that, it's different. it's late so I'll be winding now now. hope to hear from you sometime
