SimplyBill

Thank you for your comments and encouragements. Is there anything off about my writing?    Please don't keep it a secret.

SimplyBill

It isn't a problem at all. Wattpad is just a leisure time activity in my life. I'm hoping you are enjoying life even if it is busy. But I hope you can get plenty of rest, so you don't get worn out.
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kezzam2

@SimplyBill I like how you write, it flows. I am crazy busy so don't get a lot of time to read, if i see anything i'll let you know.
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Ana_Miga

Thanku for reading Amaryllis' little bookshop. And thanku for the follow.

SimplyBill

@Ana_Miga I should take your advice and try romance, a genre, I fear to write. I'm not as brave as you.  But I feel my fear comes out of ignorance in that genre. I tend to enjoy fantasy, because of its magical elements---a world that hangs on threads of mystery.
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Ana_Miga

The story is fun to write as it is the first time I am writing fantasy. I just get scared to write sometimes.
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SimplyBill

@Ana_Miga Only if it feels fun to do. Writing is a strange thing which can either drain your heart or fill it up. I always hope it is the latter. I haven't read your other works, so I not sure which one is the one which will draw you close and embrace you with inspiration.
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kezzam2

If you want one of your books to get better listings I run a keyword search thru A1 asking for top 25 then top 3. The top 3 i populate thru headings and text where appropriate. Hope this helps

SimplyBill

@kezzam2  Thanks for the help. I might try that. The way I found your work was a search for Humor. I was directed to your "Aussie As".  I tend to click updated recently, so I know the author hasn't abandon their work. I avoid people with too many views, because I feel people with less views appreciate a read, and those with too many views might not even look at a comment.
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SimplyBill

Thank you for your comments and encouragements. Is there anything off about my writing?    Please don't keep it a secret.

SimplyBill

It isn't a problem at all. Wattpad is just a leisure time activity in my life. I'm hoping you are enjoying life even if it is busy. But I hope you can get plenty of rest, so you don't get worn out.
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kezzam2

@SimplyBill I like how you write, it flows. I am crazy busy so don't get a lot of time to read, if i see anything i'll let you know.
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SimplyBill

"Mind Above the Skies" Wendy tied up the last loose end. And I'm thinking, is this the end? It surprised me, she's just sitting there with Ray watching the sunset. Are endings that easy to write?

SimplyBill

It depends on the story. My story ended quite easily. It was sort of sad when I wrote that final scene. But looking back I did everything to make it feel worthy. I even went on one last little adventure to bring a little sparkle down from the heavens.
            
            Your story was hard to end. It would be in a messy court case or even worst. Being in a foreign country and the investigator involved with one of the people who was murdered. It was quite a tangle. I'm just going off of my memory of the story. I would have to re-read the ending to make any comments worthy of listening to.
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pearlhere12

@SimplyBill I'm actually not sure but I don't think endings are easy to write. Mine is incomplete or maybe not even the end...
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FHLevin

Hi. Thanks for the follow.

SimplyBill

@FHLevin   I really haven't read much of your prompt challenges, not enough to really reply yet. I just finished watching Struggo's reading today. Everyone did so well. I can't even decide who to vote for.
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FHLevin

@SimplyBill Hahaha! Alright, keep your secrets. I was just wondering what exactly did you read and if you had any feedback. I'd love to hear it.
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SimplyBill

@FHLevin  Yes, I like to keep secrets. But I'm sure someday I'll be found out.
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