allthosewhowonder
i wish i could write reviews on books so people could read them before they read the book but they can’t so i just will here. i found your book had an amazing storyline and i understand where you were trying to go with it. but i did feel like the chapters were so short and moved to fast. and things didn’t add up sometimes. which is okay ! first book it means learning i just wanted to give some constructive criticism. other then that loved it sm!!
Simply__Me____
I appreciate your criticism❤️ I was 14-15 when I wrote this so I definitely can see the errors and the cringiness now haha
