Simply__Me____

I’ve been thinking about maybe rewriting my Green Goblin fanfic now that I’m older

allthosewhowonder

i wish i could write reviews on books so people could read them before they read the book but they can’t so i just will here. i found your book had an amazing storyline and i understand where you were trying to go with it. but i did feel like the chapters were so short and moved to fast. and things didn’t add up sometimes. which is okay ! first book it means learning i just wanted to give some constructive criticism. other then that loved it sm!!

Simply__Me____

I appreciate your criticism❤️ I was 14-15 when I wrote this so I definitely can see the errors and the cringiness now haha 
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