SagweKwamboka

Sinai_Fiza

@SagweKwamboka Hi there and thanks for the book recommendation. But it is kinda rude to just show up out of the blue in someone's feed and throw a link like that. Plz say a proper hi and explain why you r putting a link on the person's feed. That will be appreciated. Best wishes!
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originalverbivore

Hey Sinai, thank you for reading All The Things We Lost! I hope you're enjoying the story so far :) And if it's not too much to ask, would you be willing to share your thoughts on the story with me? You don't have to, of course, but it would be greatly appreciated! And if you don't feel like it, don't worry -- I'm already so grateful you wanted to give the story a chance!
          
          Love, Jessy
          
          - Jessy

Sinai_Fiza

@originalverbivore all things that we lost is more than special not "not special 'enough'" ...it just it takes time to be popular in wattpad and it takes time to the readers to attract towards the writers. Don't doubt ur writing skill. 
            
            And also try out "a thousand storms" by yuenwrites .... She's the best and that story.... u will fall in love with it and plz do tell me abt how u felt abt it! :)
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originalverbivore

@Sinai_Fiza Don't ever hesitate - I love talking to my readers! (And I'm sure all other writers are too!) Your message was lovely, and you overwhelmed me with praise to the point that I don't even know what to say. When I say thank you, I really mean thank you a thousand times over. Lately, I've been doubting my writing a lot, especially All The Things We Lost because I don't feel like it's special 'enough' (if that makes sense), but this gives me such a confidence boost and makes me want to write more :D
            
            (And a quick thank you for sharing the author yuenwrites, I really want to check out more writers! Great recommendation :))
            
            Really, from the bottom of my heart, thank you. And let me tell you again, every writer will love you when you decide to share your thoughts! It's always wanted, so don't hold yourself back ^^ You made my day!
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Sinai_Fiza

@originalverbivore I just literally got what I wanted! I really wanted to talking about the book with you, but kinda hesitating since we are literally strangers and I'm not even a published author in wattpad! 
            
            From the beginning, the story felt different and very smooth. There was no rush and the character development of Emily and River feels completely natural and steady (a thing that most of the writers fail to give steadiness and smoothness to their main characters)
            
            There's chemistry between them and the way you describe their developing romance! I'm falling in love with it. 
            
            The plot may seem simple but I can say without any hesitation that your "writing tone" is your weapon. It draws the readers to go deeper and deeper into the emotion, you use the exact words and it makes them read further and further.
            
            If I say, from three years of reading experience in wattpad, your book is flawless with perfect tone, smoothness and progression of the plot.
            
            This book and your writing, they both have damn potential and it's really inspiring me!!!! After @yuenwrites of wattpad , u r the writer that inspires me the most!
            
            I LOVE THIS BOOK A LOTTTTTT! 
            
            and thank you very very much for asking for my thoughts! I was mentally dying to share how much I've grown to Emily and River! 
            
            And plz plz plz plz enter this to wattysaward contest! I think this book had the potential! 
            
            I'll be waiting to vote it! :)
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