SincerelyOPN
Okay so my teacher just came up to me, with my short story in hand-- and she said that that was one of her favorites. "The changes are great." When I thought they sucked lol. I made a short story about a man named Vincent Maloy, who is the best story teller in the nursing home. He impressed everyone but Marla Dunphy and his main goal was to get her to laugh. Long story short he made her laugh at his terrible knitting skills. It was weird.