Sincerelybrashae
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A lot happened and I need to know where everybodyās head is at
First of all, LONDON GIRL. How are we feeling about seeing this vulnerable/scared side of her? Did yāall expect seeing [redacted] again to affect her this badly?
Saint finding out what London said to Kori.. chile we knew that wasnāt staying a secret forever lmao. How do we feel about his reaction?
Kori and that damn life jacket analogy wheww. *passes around tissues*. Do yāall think Kori gives TOO much grace sometimes?
And Saint basically saying idgaf bout none of that lmao! That man does not play behind that lady
Now Ced⦠my sweet summer child. š
Ced talking about marriage and babies while London sitting across from him knowing what she knows⦠CHILEEEEE.
Now that we know the truth about that clinic appointment⦠WERE YāALL FOOLED?
And London getting an abortion without telling Ced⦠whew. What yāall thinkin?
Then Saint finding that appointment??? Yikes!
When Saint said if he found out Kori ākilled his babyā their relationship was dead, how did yāall feel? Too far?
The RELIEF when London walked in and told that man the truth..
But Mr. Mind My Business lasted approximately 45 seconds before reading London for FILTH. Was Saint wrong for checking her about how she treated Kori?
Kori still showing up for London after everything she said.. hmm
And FINALLYYYYY, Kori and London talked! How are we feeling about their conversation?
Most importantly⦠what the fuck is London gonna do about Ced? Do yāall think she needs to tell him, or is this one secret that needs to go to the GRAVE?
And if she does tell him⦠how do we think Cedarian is taking that news?
What was your favorite scene? Favorite quote? Did anything in this chapter change the way you see London?
Donāt be scary nowwww, I know this chapter gave yāall opinions š Letās talk!
bracelove15
Iām literally speechless⦠I wasnāt expecting seeing how badly the situation affected London. I feel like she needs to go get help so she wonāt sabotage her relationship and so she can start to heal. I honestly thought Kori was gonna tell Saint about what Lon said but I understand why she didnāt tell him. I was surprised by his reaction Iām gonna lie I did want him to go off but once Kori explained the situation my perspective changed instantly. Saint was not wrong for defending Kori because Lon should not have brought up their child and that was very disrespectful. Once Ced find out about Lon getting an abortion behind his back I think he is gonna leave her especially after the conversation they just had at the restaurant she was dead a** wrong š now with the appointment situation I knew Kori wasnāt the one who got an abortion because they always talk about trying for another baby and they are trying now as we speak š¤ The conversation between Kori and Lon ehh I was really pissed Lon waited a whole month and you reached out to Kori because you needed her but not once did Lon take accountability for what she said. I think Lon is gonna tell Ced but I think itās gonna have him fall back from the group for a minute. Ms. Author Girl I didnāt pull my edges out this week I canāt wait for the next one! āŗļø
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KennedyColen
Iām so used to London being the tough one almost so seeing her vulnerable/scared side of her broke my heart and I didnāt think that seeing her ex woulda affected her this bad. Saint reaction was valid cuz we all know he donāt play behind her. Yes I do think Kori gives too much grace but I get it tho! London gaslit that man real bad during dinner and London getting the abortion and not saying nun is not gonna well she definitely shoulda told him but I understand why to a certain extent. Saint reaction was valid considering him and Kori have been trying for another baby. Saint wasnāt wrong for checking London because someone had to cuz we both know Kori wasnāt gon do it! Iām glad that London and Kori was able to talk but London asking Kori to start was crazy work and LONDON HAS TO TELL CED IDC! I honestly feel like when he do find out then he will probably take a break from London cuz the one thing he asked her not to do without talking to him she did behind his back. I definitely see London in a different light now like Iām really heartbroken for London because Iām not used to seeing her like this. I donāt think London shoulda asked Kori to go to the clinic with her knowing they havenāt had a conversation but I understand why Kori went because I probably wouldāve the same thing if I was Kori.
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beywantsnikaa
and yes Kori give toooo much grace because even after that conversation I would still keep my distance because it shouldn't have took a month for a apology or for my man to tell you about yourself before you do.
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Sincerelybrashae
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- Trouble In Paradise iscussion Post -
A lot happened and I need to know where everybodyās head is at
First of all, LONDON GIRL. How are we feeling about seeing this vulnerable/scared side of her? Did yāall expect seeing [redacted] again to affect her this badly?
Saint finding out what London said to Kori.. chile we knew that wasnāt staying a secret forever lmao. How do we feel about his reaction?
Kori and that damn life jacket analogy wheww. *passes around tissues*. Do yāall think Kori gives TOO much grace sometimes?
And Saint basically saying idgaf bout none of that lmao! That man does not play behind that lady
Now Ced⦠my sweet summer child. š
Ced talking about marriage and babies while London sitting across from him knowing what she knows⦠CHILEEEEE.
Now that we know the truth about that clinic appointment⦠WERE YāALL FOOLED?
And London getting an abortion without telling Ced⦠whew. What yāall thinkin?
Then Saint finding that appointment??? Yikes!
When Saint said if he found out Kori ākilled his babyā their relationship was dead, how did yāall feel? Too far?
The RELIEF when London walked in and told that man the truth..
But Mr. Mind My Business lasted approximately 45 seconds before reading London for FILTH. Was Saint wrong for checking her about how she treated Kori?
Kori still showing up for London after everything she said.. hmm
And FINALLYYYYY, Kori and London talked! How are we feeling about their conversation?
Most importantly⦠what the fuck is London gonna do about Ced? Do yāall think she needs to tell him, or is this one secret that needs to go to the GRAVE?
And if she does tell him⦠how do we think Cedarian is taking that news?
What was your favorite scene? Favorite quote? Did anything in this chapter change the way you see London?
Donāt be scary nowwww, I know this chapter gave yāall opinions š Letās talk!
bracelove15
Iām literally speechless⦠I wasnāt expecting seeing how badly the situation affected London. I feel like she needs to go get help so she wonāt sabotage her relationship and so she can start to heal. I honestly thought Kori was gonna tell Saint about what Lon said but I understand why she didnāt tell him. I was surprised by his reaction Iām gonna lie I did want him to go off but once Kori explained the situation my perspective changed instantly. Saint was not wrong for defending Kori because Lon should not have brought up their child and that was very disrespectful. Once Ced find out about Lon getting an abortion behind his back I think he is gonna leave her especially after the conversation they just had at the restaurant she was dead a** wrong š now with the appointment situation I knew Kori wasnāt the one who got an abortion because they always talk about trying for another baby and they are trying now as we speak š¤ The conversation between Kori and Lon ehh I was really pissed Lon waited a whole month and you reached out to Kori because you needed her but not once did Lon take accountability for what she said. I think Lon is gonna tell Ced but I think itās gonna have him fall back from the group for a minute. Ms. Author Girl I didnāt pull my edges out this week I canāt wait for the next one! āŗļø
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KennedyColen
Iām so used to London being the tough one almost so seeing her vulnerable/scared side of her broke my heart and I didnāt think that seeing her ex woulda affected her this bad. Saint reaction was valid cuz we all know he donāt play behind her. Yes I do think Kori gives too much grace but I get it tho! London gaslit that man real bad during dinner and London getting the abortion and not saying nun is not gonna well she definitely shoulda told him but I understand why to a certain extent. Saint reaction was valid considering him and Kori have been trying for another baby. Saint wasnāt wrong for checking London because someone had to cuz we both know Kori wasnāt gon do it! Iām glad that London and Kori was able to talk but London asking Kori to start was crazy work and LONDON HAS TO TELL CED IDC! I honestly feel like when he do find out then he will probably take a break from London cuz the one thing he asked her not to do without talking to him she did behind his back. I definitely see London in a different light now like Iām really heartbroken for London because Iām not used to seeing her like this. I donāt think London shoulda asked Kori to go to the clinic with her knowing they havenāt had a conversation but I understand why Kori went because I probably wouldāve the same thing if I was Kori.
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beywantsnikaa
and yes Kori give toooo much grace because even after that conversation I would still keep my distance because it shouldn't have took a month for a apology or for my man to tell you about yourself before you do.
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Sincerelybrashae
CHAPTER 29 | TROUBLE IN PARADISE
OUT NOW! thanks for being patient <3
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Sincerelybrashae
Chapter should be out tonight!
Kaaytee20
Karin(Kori) new hairstyle is sooooo tea on herš canāt wait to read Saint go crazy and canāt keep his hands off her cause itās something new she never tried and how good she looks with the style (hint hint) šš¤ .
Sincerelybrashae
Lmao hey guyssss! I have a chapter almost complete that Iāve been working on. Iām trying to decide if I want to wait and drop two or go ahead and drop this one. I may be done with it by Friday night, possibly Saturday. I know yāall miss me lol and I miss yall too! Donāt worry Iām working!!
ANGELAA_THEE_WRITER
@Sincerelybrashae finally!!!!damn so excited to read it please drop it this weekend...let's go
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ANGELAA_THEE_WRITER
Hey girll hau doing anyways I know you might be busy with sum which is okay but about u updating us on the next chapters....man its been quite long and on a lowkey we all waiting for u please squeeze dem chapters on ur scheduleš
Litapooh
I was randomly rereading and im so glad you have the passion, talent, discipline, and skill for writing and storytelling. I hope whatever higher or spiritual power that nourishes you, blesses and favors you tenfold for sharing your gifts with us. As always, thank you for sharing your gifts with us and I hope you have a spectacular day, week, life, etc.
Sincerelybrashae
Awww this is so sweet and beautiful! Thank you so much for this! I appreciate you <3
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