Sincerelybrashae

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          	A lot happened and I need to know where everybody’s head is at 
          	
          	First of all, LONDON GIRL. How are we feeling about seeing this vulnerable/scared side of her? Did y’all expect seeing [redacted] again to affect her this badly?
          	
          	Saint finding out what London said to Kori.. chile we knew that wasn’t staying a secret forever lmao. How do we feel about his reaction?
          	
          	Kori and that damn life jacket analogy wheww. *passes around tissues*. Do y’all think Kori gives TOO much grace sometimes?
          	
          	And Saint basically saying idgaf bout none of that lmao! That man does not play behind that lady 
          	
          	Now Ced… my sweet summer child. 😭
          	
          	Ced talking about marriage and babies while London sitting across from him knowing what she knows… CHILEEEEE.
          	
          	Now that we know the truth about that clinic appointment… WERE Y’ALL FOOLED?
          	
          	And London getting an abortion without telling Ced… whew. What y’all thinkin?
          	
          	Then Saint finding that appointment??? Yikes!
          	
          	When Saint said if he found out Kori ā€œkilled his babyā€ their relationship was dead, how did y’all feel? Too far?
          	
          	The RELIEF when London walked in and told that man the truth..
          	
          	But Mr. Mind My Business lasted approximately 45 seconds before reading London for FILTH. Was Saint wrong for checking her about how she treated Kori?
          	
          	Kori still showing up for London after everything she said.. hmm
          	
          	And FINALLYYYYY, Kori and London talked! How are we feeling about their conversation?
          	
          	Most importantly… what the fuck is London gonna do about Ced? Do y’all think she needs to tell him, or is this one secret that needs to go to the GRAVE?
          	
          	And if she does tell him… how do we think Cedarian is taking that news? 
          	
          	What was your favorite scene? Favorite quote? Did anything in this chapter change the way you see London?
          	
          	Don’t be scary nowwww, I know this chapter gave y’all opinions šŸ˜‚ Let’s talk!

bracelove15

I’m literally speechless… I wasn’t expecting seeing how badly the situation affected London. I feel like she needs to go get help so she won’t sabotage her relationship and so she can start to heal. I honestly thought Kori was gonna tell Saint about what Lon said but I understand why she didn’t tell him. I was surprised by his reaction I’m gonna lie I did want him to go off but once Kori explained the situation my perspective changed instantly. Saint was not wrong for defending Kori because Lon should not have brought up their child and that was very disrespectful. Once Ced find out about Lon getting an abortion behind his back I think he is gonna leave her especially after the conversation they just had at the restaurant she was dead a** wrong šŸ˜’ now with the appointment situation I knew Kori wasn’t the one who got an abortion because they always talk about trying for another baby and they are trying now as we speak 🤭 The conversation between Kori and Lon ehh I was really pissed Lon waited a whole month and you reached out to Kori because you needed her but not once did Lon take accountability for what she said. I think Lon is gonna tell Ced but I think it’s gonna have him fall back from the group for a minute. Ms. Author Girl I didn’t pull my edges out this week I can’t wait for the next one! ā˜ŗļø
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KennedyColen

I’m so used to London being the tough one almost so seeing her vulnerable/scared side of her broke my heart and I didn’t think that seeing her ex woulda affected her this bad. Saint reaction was valid cuz we all know he don’t play behind her. Yes I do think Kori gives too much grace but I get it tho! London gaslit that man real bad during dinner and London getting the abortion and not saying nun is not gonna well she definitely shoulda told him but I understand why to a certain extent. Saint reaction was valid considering him and Kori have been trying for another baby. Saint wasn’t wrong for checking London because someone had to cuz we both know Kori wasn’t gon do it! I’m glad that London and Kori was able to talk but London asking Kori to start was crazy work and LONDON HAS TO TELL CED IDC! I honestly feel like when he do find out then he will probably take a break from London cuz the one thing he asked her not to do without talking to him she did behind his back. I definitely see London in a different light now like I’m really heartbroken for London because I’m not used to seeing her like this. I don’t think London shoulda asked Kori to go to the clinic with her knowing they haven’t had a conversation but I understand why Kori went because I probably would’ve the same thing if I was Kori. 
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beywantsnikaa

and yes Kori give toooo much grace because even after that conversation I would still keep my distance because it shouldn't have took a month for a apology or for my man to tell you about yourself before you do.
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Sincerelybrashae

this message may be offensive
- Trouble In Paradise iscussion Post -
          
          A lot happened and I need to know where everybody’s head is at 
          
          First of all, LONDON GIRL. How are we feeling about seeing this vulnerable/scared side of her? Did y’all expect seeing [redacted] again to affect her this badly?
          
          Saint finding out what London said to Kori.. chile we knew that wasn’t staying a secret forever lmao. How do we feel about his reaction?
          
          Kori and that damn life jacket analogy wheww. *passes around tissues*. Do y’all think Kori gives TOO much grace sometimes?
          
          And Saint basically saying idgaf bout none of that lmao! That man does not play behind that lady 
          
          Now Ced… my sweet summer child. 😭
          
          Ced talking about marriage and babies while London sitting across from him knowing what she knows… CHILEEEEE.
          
          Now that we know the truth about that clinic appointment… WERE Y’ALL FOOLED?
          
          And London getting an abortion without telling Ced… whew. What y’all thinkin?
          
          Then Saint finding that appointment??? Yikes!
          
          When Saint said if he found out Kori ā€œkilled his babyā€ their relationship was dead, how did y’all feel? Too far?
          
          The RELIEF when London walked in and told that man the truth..
          
          But Mr. Mind My Business lasted approximately 45 seconds before reading London for FILTH. Was Saint wrong for checking her about how she treated Kori?
          
          Kori still showing up for London after everything she said.. hmm
          
          And FINALLYYYYY, Kori and London talked! How are we feeling about their conversation?
          
          Most importantly… what the fuck is London gonna do about Ced? Do y’all think she needs to tell him, or is this one secret that needs to go to the GRAVE?
          
          And if she does tell him… how do we think Cedarian is taking that news? 
          
          What was your favorite scene? Favorite quote? Did anything in this chapter change the way you see London?
          
          Don’t be scary nowwww, I know this chapter gave y’all opinions šŸ˜‚ Let’s talk!

bracelove15

I’m literally speechless… I wasn’t expecting seeing how badly the situation affected London. I feel like she needs to go get help so she won’t sabotage her relationship and so she can start to heal. I honestly thought Kori was gonna tell Saint about what Lon said but I understand why she didn’t tell him. I was surprised by his reaction I’m gonna lie I did want him to go off but once Kori explained the situation my perspective changed instantly. Saint was not wrong for defending Kori because Lon should not have brought up their child and that was very disrespectful. Once Ced find out about Lon getting an abortion behind his back I think he is gonna leave her especially after the conversation they just had at the restaurant she was dead a** wrong šŸ˜’ now with the appointment situation I knew Kori wasn’t the one who got an abortion because they always talk about trying for another baby and they are trying now as we speak 🤭 The conversation between Kori and Lon ehh I was really pissed Lon waited a whole month and you reached out to Kori because you needed her but not once did Lon take accountability for what she said. I think Lon is gonna tell Ced but I think it’s gonna have him fall back from the group for a minute. Ms. Author Girl I didn’t pull my edges out this week I can’t wait for the next one! ā˜ŗļø
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KennedyColen

I’m so used to London being the tough one almost so seeing her vulnerable/scared side of her broke my heart and I didn’t think that seeing her ex woulda affected her this bad. Saint reaction was valid cuz we all know he don’t play behind her. Yes I do think Kori gives too much grace but I get it tho! London gaslit that man real bad during dinner and London getting the abortion and not saying nun is not gonna well she definitely shoulda told him but I understand why to a certain extent. Saint reaction was valid considering him and Kori have been trying for another baby. Saint wasn’t wrong for checking London because someone had to cuz we both know Kori wasn’t gon do it! I’m glad that London and Kori was able to talk but London asking Kori to start was crazy work and LONDON HAS TO TELL CED IDC! I honestly feel like when he do find out then he will probably take a break from London cuz the one thing he asked her not to do without talking to him she did behind his back. I definitely see London in a different light now like I’m really heartbroken for London because I’m not used to seeing her like this. I don’t think London shoulda asked Kori to go to the clinic with her knowing they haven’t had a conversation but I understand why Kori went because I probably would’ve the same thing if I was Kori. 
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beywantsnikaa

and yes Kori give toooo much grace because even after that conversation I would still keep my distance because it shouldn't have took a month for a apology or for my man to tell you about yourself before you do.
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Kaaytee20

Karin(Kori) new hairstyle is sooooo tea on her😭 can’t wait to read Saint go crazy and can’t keep his hands off her cause it’s something new she never tried and how good she looks with the style (hint hint) šŸ‘€šŸ¤­ . 

Sincerelybrashae

Lmao hey guyssss! I have a chapter almost complete that I’ve been working on. I’m trying to decide if I want to wait and drop two or go ahead and drop this one. I may be done with it by Friday night, possibly Saturday. I know y’all miss me lol and I miss yall too! Don’t worry I’m working!! 

ANGELAA_THEE_WRITER

@Sincerelybrashae finally!!!!damn so excited to read it please drop it this weekend...let's go 
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deebrown83

Good cause I literally just logged in here to come ask are we close lmao
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jazzyboo_luv

I can’t wait !!!!!!!!
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Litapooh

I was randomly rereading and im so glad you have the passion, talent, discipline, and skill for writing and storytelling. I hope whatever higher or spiritual power that nourishes you, blesses and favors you tenfold for sharing your gifts with us. As always, thank you for sharing your gifts with us and I hope you have a spectacular day, week, life, etc. 

Sincerelybrashae

Awww this is so sweet and beautiful! Thank you so much for this! I appreciate you <3 
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