SinfullyRomantic

I haven't posted on this message board for a while but, I wanted to announce that I have finally posted my new story. It was supposed to be yesterday but, life took me by surprise. I'd love to hear everyone's feedback and I hope you all enjoy 

BibleBubba20

If and when i get to writing fanfics again one of the things i want to do is write a story thats set in the pre reboot archie Sonic comics. Difference being is that the Bible will true in the story so there will be changes to the cannon such as Knuckles and his time in the after life( in short it never happens in my story). Story will be that humanity almost dies through nuclear disaster and the survivors use animal DNA to mutant themselves into mobians to survive, others get mutated into a breed of humans called overlanders because of the nuclear effects but are still essentially  human,  only few humans remain pure blood humans. At the start the mobians and overlanders become so cut off from the humans  and there past that they forget the human domian and go back to the stone age. But then they get ahold of the chaos emeralds and while they do intectllually advance  they dont morally. But then some human Christain missionaries come and share the gosple with them and things change for the better. Strangely enough the mobians are more receiving of the gospel then the overlanders. However a group of humans and mobians who hated the Bible banded together to wipe out Christianity, as a result Christianty is mostly forgotten expect by a few. Then one day Sonic learns about Jesus and gives His life to Him and the Bible and leads many to Christ. But the mobians arent as accpecting of Christianity this time around. In fact due to the hostilely towards overlanders and that humans and overlanders can be easliy misaken one for another many mobian call Christianty an overlanders religion. Theres more too it then this but this is about the gist of it. What do you think ?

BibleBubba20

I got a message to Amy in campus life along with all other bullying victims. Those who ask why they do what they do. 
          
          Its got nothing to do with you. They were/are just bullies who get a kick out of causing other people pain and in there eyes you were just an easy target. There the broken ones not you.

BibleBubba20

By the way i know you havent finshed medevil story. But i think i already know the moral of that story 
          " You cant fight darkness with darkness, it only causes more darkness". 
          Definely looking forward to seeing the rest of that story too btw

BibleBubba20

@SinfullyRomantic Regardless im still looking forward to seeing the rest of the stories
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SinfullyRomantic

I was going for a different moral for that story. But I’m definitely gonna keep up with that story. And I was planning on making a sequel for it too. I kind of also been thinking of turning my stories into comics, for a visual effect. But my art gotta improve first lol
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BibleBubba20

Good job on your recent chapters. I think the moral of this story is " If you dont have trust and faith in a relationship, you dont have anything".

BibleBubba20

@SinfullyRomantic No disrespect but i dont think theres anything left to repair. Amy and Sonic both messed up and theres no fixing things. What needs to happen is they need to both accpect there share of the blame, apologize, and forgive each other. Then they take all the good memories pf what they had before and use them to build somthing new and better. Sonic then makes a new and better promise then what he made before and likewise Amy makes a promise of her own. And there friends show there support by apologizing to Sonic for being such jerks to him and help Amy to be more independent the right way.
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SinfullyRomantic

@BibleBubba20 Thank you so much for this <333. Yes, you are correct. This trilogy was meant to repair Sonic and Amy's relationship from grade school. Because of their rocky start in college, it was hard to build trust and with people like Sally, or Mark, or Elias, it was hard to have faith.
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BibleBubba20

When will the next chapters of your stories be ready ?

SinfullyRomantic

I’m sorry for this giant delay. My laptop charger blew out on me during my moving process. I won’t be able to get a new one until the end of this month. Part of the chapter is written already but all my notes were on that laptop I definitely haven’t abandoned the stories. I will be back 
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Ren7252

Hello, will campus life be continued?

BibleBubba20

@_Sarahkins_ oh and also maybe get Amy's parents to understand these things as well along with the fact that since Amy is their daughter they're probably biased
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BibleBubba20

@_Sarahkins_ I realize she deep down probably already realizes all that but it seems to me that somewhere along the line it seems easier for her to put all the blame on Sonic. 
            And not just her but all their friends Amy's parents Sonic's siblings. It just seems to me that everybody is so ready willing and able to offer Amy advice and support. Well all they want to do is Judge Sonic point out his flaws and put all the blame on him and just him.
            
            My point is. Like I said it would be nice to see them start showing Sonic a little more compassion and understanding and appreciation as a friend along with an appreciation that Amy has much to blame as Sonic and in a lot of ways they had some blame too given the fact that they never stood up for anyone Sally bullied her either.
            
            Because if Sonic truly is their friend or brother in the case of Sonia manic. While you do try to help them grow you nevertheless don't try to change them or be so quick as to point out their flaws let alone their past.
            
            Rather you accept them for who they are. You embrace the good you tolerate the bad and you be grateful for what you get.
            And it would be nice for them to appreciate what they have with Sonic and be grateful for it.
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BibleBubba20

@_Sarahkins_ I have a request about that if that's okay. It's your book and I ain't going to tell you what to do with your book but if I can make a request. Do you think you could get the gang to start showing Sonic a little more compassion and understanding? 
            
            Because I know they're hard on him because they care about him and they don't want to see Amy getting hurt. But it just seems to me they could show him a little more compassion and appreciation as a friend. For example him putting Sally first. I realize Amy was hurt because of that but Sonic was in a committed relationship and while I committed relationship doesn't have as much value as marriage surely has asmuch commitment as marriage.
            
            Plus while I agree that Sonic shouldn't have been so oblivious to the pain Amy was in due to Sally. The fact is Sonic still cared about Sally and usually if you care about somebody you don't want to believe that they're doing something wrong or that they're in the wrong.
            And as for him lying to Amy about Sally coming back and getting the others to do the same. With all due respect to the Sonic gang. That's not substantially different from Amy not telling the truth about Sally to spare Sonic any pain
            
            Plus she should have told him that she knew Sally was back and about her gathering information for Mark, she should have known that prom night was going to end in a bust given how Sally is in this story, she could have contacted Sonic even though he didn't contact her, she should have known that Sonic probably felt guilty about the whole thing hence why he didn't contact her, and she should also realize that all the pain she endured is just as much her fault as it is Sonic's fault. Had she stood up for herself and told Sonic the truth and he didn't listen then it would have been only on him but because she didn't it's on her too.
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