@SingerCammy hmm... well I think that The Brothers is still very interesting. I think it would be cool if you either continued that or did another amazing poem. :)
I don't know if you should continue Just another Day in High School... you know, all things considered. :/
I'm really looking forward to reading more things from you! ^-^
It's okay, take you're time, don't stress.
Good writing means being in the write mood, it's not a good idea to write if you're feeling stressed... that's probably why I usually make so many errors on my English essays...