@SinuTheGod Although I'm Argentinian, I don't know much about the English language because I really liked the one about Kokujin, the one you're in, it's not lacking or yes, but I'm good at it. I thought about several stories like a female Naruto in the world of Kokujin like Kanoko's older sister or Hiyoki is the middle sister and Hiroki doesn't know about her because of his trip abroad, but in yours it was good, you just have to think and imagine how to continue it since in the part that appears, Mi-noo with those words seemed good to me or I don't know