SiobhanSW
chapters 6-10 have bee updated: past/present tense mix-ups should be fixed, along with grammar and added punctuation. Species names also change. I am now going to sleep xD
I will do the last four chapter fixes when I wake up
SiobhanSW
SiobhanSW
Chapters 0-5 have been updated: present/past tense mix-ups should now be fixed. Grammar should be better. Punctuation improvements. Spell names/species names have been changed to avoid copyright - please check 'before we begin' for the key.
Chapters 16-17 : minor errors fixed. Species names changed to avoid copyright - check 'before we begin' for the key.
SiobhanSW
I will get round to fixing the other chapters within the next few days, please be patient, I only have so many monster drinks to last me xD
SiobhanSW
I wanted to try avoid WizardsoftheCoast copyright so i could maybe one day publish my story... then I remembered specie names are copyrighted too Dx
also some spells :')
SiobhanSW
Eleana now has character art <3
All main characters now have art to help visualise them
Lilyravn
@SiobhanSW you're welcome🥹
Lilyravn
@SiobhanSW all of them are sooo pretty😍
SiobhanSW
character art chapter has been updated - Added Vorn (it's a coloured sketch, i was lazy xD)
Next to do is Eleana
Lilyravn
@SiobhanSW can't wait to see Eleana
Lilyravn
@SiobhanSW how could you call it lazy? It was so beautiful😭 I know he flirts with everyone, but he's stunning! I love him
SiobhanSW
@arch-viola hahaha thank you. I just couldn't be bothered to neaten the sketch x)
SiobhanSW
some punctuation and grammar updates to chapter 1 and 2. Ill eventually fix them all xD
SiobhanSW
slowly fixing the grammar in my story x)
SiobhanSW
sorrrry, ive been busy with work, ill finish this at some point when i have a proper schedule sorted. i swear
SiobhanSW
ok story is edited as well, i fixed my mistakes xD
SiobhanSW
3 chapters remain until coffee shop crush is finished x)