MidknightWolf646

Hey you had a Kaiju Girls story right?

MidknightWolf646

@SirGhidrah2 I believe it was call Kaiju Altercation
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SirGhidrah2

@Samat2010 Suspicious how you knew that. 
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Samat2010

https://www.wattpad.com/story/371375114-the-unusual-adventures-of-gojira-in-another-world
          Hello author. I would like to know your opinion about my interpretation of your old work

Samat2010

@SirGhidrah2 Thank for advice! New works will appear throughout this year. You can see them on my profile
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SirGhidrah2

@Samat2010 It's an interesting premise, but the pacing could be worked on. I'd suggest adding more details and slowly implementing new characters instead of name dropping all of them at once. I'd also suggest working on your characters' pov and recheck it. Because you did put "I," which implies first person, but the characters were in third person. Also, regarding Pov, you should make an opening line at the start of their pov, which helps the reader understand who's pov it is, without directly telling them. Because I somewhat got confused when it swapped with Ghidorah and Godzilla's pov. But other than that, it was a fun read. And I'd love to see what else you can do in the future. 
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SirGhidrah2

@Samat2010 ill check it out when I can
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zilhaziq

Plz tell me you going to adopt my favourite story that was so epic for you make this everyone like this story https://www.wattpad.com/story/360543676-the-final-war-kaijugirls

zilhaziq

@SirGhidrah2 like try remember you own password form the past what you remember you own main account password first
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zilhaziq

@SirGhidrah2 i hope but if nobody adopt this story and other best story longer ever made ... you have to adopt make ever story you work so hard you ever made or fine your main account soon as possible if nobody new how long you are busy or lazy i just said to you.
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SirGhidrah2

@zilhaziq Hmm, honestly I'm not sure if I'll pick up any of the stories on my main account. But I encourage anyone to adopt them and put their own spin on it.
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