@Samat2010 It's an interesting premise, but the pacing could be worked on. I'd suggest adding more details and slowly implementing new characters instead of name dropping all of them at once. I'd also suggest working on your characters' pov and recheck it. Because you did put "I," which implies first person, but the characters were in third person. Also, regarding Pov, you should make an opening line at the start of their pov, which helps the reader understand who's pov it is, without directly telling them. Because I somewhat got confused when it swapped with Ghidorah and Godzilla's pov. But other than that, it was a fun read. And I'd love to see what else you can do in the future.