SirGhidrah2

Been plotting on The Nightmare and The King, even reread it and have some fun ideas. But while I plan that, I'd like to also post a new story that emerged from such intensive plotting.

SirGhidrah2

I don't know what to write, anyone have any requests?

SirGhidrah2

@SirGhidrah2 A Sukuna style Shin is such an interesting take, I love it, but I also hate that I didn't think of that. I'll be sure to credit you for that.
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Doomstoroyah

So... You finished the last chapter with Godzilla accepting to host the soul of Shin... so I guess you could do two things in the next chapter. 
            
            You could make Shin some sort of entity that shares the same body of Gojira and could take over in Gojira's weak moments, like Sukuna. 
            
            Or make just appear Gojira as a new being that lives in pain because of Shin's soul and the only thing he can do is to consume radiation to evolve his body to adapt to the it's soul. 
            
            During this journey of pain, he would come across the wars between all kaiju girls, space Kaijugirls and humans, understanding how the hate he felt in his life is way similar to the hate that this new world has and how this would bring It to the absolute destruction.
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SirGhidrah2

@Doomstoroyah oh sure, any suggestions on how I should continue it?
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SirGhidrah2

First chapter of the Rebooted Why want me dead, now labeled Why should you live? I know this might be off-putting, this new take on Shin may or may not be what y'all were expecting, but nonetheless I hope it doesn't fail to deliver.

Doomstoroyah

@SirGhidrah2  Hell Yeah, I was waiting so much that!
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DeathReaper170666

Are you going to continue why want me dead on this account???

SirGhidrah2

@DeathReaper170666 Alright I just made the first chapter
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SirGhidrah2

@DeathReaper170666 I replied to you by accident. Also, what are you saying okay to? 
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MidknightWolf646

Hey you had a Kaiju Girls story right?

MidknightWolf646

@SirGhidrah2 I believe it was call Kaiju Altercation
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SirGhidrah2

@Samat2010 Suspicious how you knew that. 
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Samat2010

Hi, could you read some of my stories and tell me how it was?

SirGhidrah2

@Samat2010 But I'll check them out when I can. Right now I'm about to sleep
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SirGhidrah2

@Samat2010 Sorry I've been off watpad for a long while
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Samat2010

https://www.wattpad.com/story/371375114-the-unusual-adventures-of-gojira-in-another-world
          Hello author. I would like to know your opinion about my interpretation of your old work

Samat2010

@SirGhidrah2 Thank for advice! New works will appear throughout this year. You can see them on my profile
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SirGhidrah2

@Samat2010 It's an interesting premise, but the pacing could be worked on. I'd suggest adding more details and slowly implementing new characters instead of name dropping all of them at once. I'd also suggest working on your characters' pov and recheck it. Because you did put "I," which implies first person, but the characters were in third person. Also, regarding Pov, you should make an opening line at the start of their pov, which helps the reader understand who's pov it is, without directly telling them. Because I somewhat got confused when it swapped with Ghidorah and Godzilla's pov. But other than that, it was a fun read. And I'd love to see what else you can do in the future. 
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SirGhidrah2

@Samat2010 ill check it out when I can
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zilhaziq

Plz tell me you going to adopt my favourite story that was so epic for you make this everyone like this story https://www.wattpad.com/story/360543676-the-final-war-kaijugirls

zilhaziq

@SirGhidrah2 like try remember you own password form the past what you remember you own main account password first
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zilhaziq

@SirGhidrah2 i hope but if nobody adopt this story and other best story longer ever made ... you have to adopt make ever story you work so hard you ever made or fine your main account soon as possible if nobody new how long you are busy or lazy i just said to you.
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SirGhidrah2

@zilhaziq Hmm, honestly I'm not sure if I'll pick up any of the stories on my main account. But I encourage anyone to adopt them and put their own spin on it.
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