Soviet_Onion15

Btw wdyt of Gritty Path? 

Soviet_Onion15

@SirSplunk 
            
            He’s going to be Ernest’s male best friend in the story, a brother in arms as he too faces with his own demons
            
            His character will be based off of Nacho Varga, if you’re familiar with Better Call Saul that is
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SirSplunk

@Soviet_Onion15 I like him. Is he gonna be an important character?
            Probably an eventual bro to Ernest, I'm guessing?
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Soviet_Onion15

And that’s chapter 4
          
          No one was harmed in the making in the chapter, except Ernest
          
          Wdyt? Step in the right direction?

Soviet_Onion15

@SirSplunk 
            
            And the funniest thing while writing this was me thinking how Pinkie would ruin everything like the disguise
            
            It’s gonna be a bit of a thing in the fic but not overused
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Soviet_Onion15

@SirSplunk 
            
            Again, I aimed for a more realistic approach but I can see your point and where you’re coming from
            
            This is just the beginning, everyone will warm up to him
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Soviet_Onion15

@SirSplunk 
            
            Yeah I kinda had to make it look a bit realistic and not just cartoony. I mean last chapter was tame, and I thought I had to amp it up a little.
            
            Ernest in this first scenario is the cryptid or alien or whatever, which is something most of us irl would do and form mobs 
            
            Also fear and anger took over and didn’t make the populus listen to reason by Fluttershy and RD
            
            But relax, next chapter is the resolve
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Soviet_Onion15

Thoughts on the chapter?
          
          Also I like your reaction to the jar reference

Soviet_Onion15

@SirSplunk 
            
            Oh and a bit like Zee from Total Drama, who’s chill with most things
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Soviet_Onion15

@SirSplunk 
            
            Or you could say his memory is kinda groggy after he got sent diving. Eventually he’ll remember, but he wouldn’t wanna burden others with his issues
            
            Ernest is like Peter from Spectaculad Spiderman who quips to cope with his stress
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SirSplunk

@Soviet_Onion15 BTW, I was kinda surprised Ernest didn't have a reaction yet, to the fact that Blackmoor choked him out and threw him in the river.
            
            Unless he's willingly ignoring that or something?
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Mercury_apocalypse

And Manji not only placed her consciousness into another body, but her soul as well. To understand how the concept of the soul works is simple: the soul is the fundamental part of a being, the mind houses the consciousness of a being, and consciousness houses the soul of a being. Soul › consciousness › mind

Mercury_apocalypse

@SirSplunk As for why her body remains young, perhaps it's because Manji designed her body not to age (I think).
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SirSplunk

@Mercury_apocalypse All I know is that Manji somehow took Kaguya's soul, without her overwhelming power, out of her original body and put her in an ordinary human body.
            
            I admittedly don't know how that would work (Like, is she still immortal? Does that body age? And if not, how is it possible for a supposedly human body to remain young?), I'm honestly just following the flow of the story.
            
            Because I am nowhere near smart enough to know how things like this works.
            (ᵕ—ᴗ—)
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Mercury_apocalypse

@Mercury_apocalypse However, if they do not find a vessel compatible with them, their chakras will eventually be depleted and they will die permanently.
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Mercury_apocalypse

I know she's not dead. But that's not what I meant. What I meant was that the powers of an Otsutsuki are engraved in their very soul, not their body; they are not limited by bloodline like the Shinobi clans. Their powers come from the divine tree (most of them) and their powers are permanently imprinted on their souls, even if their bodies are destroyed they can be resurrected through the karma mark like all his powers

SirSplunk

@Mercury_apocalypse Maybe Manji used some seals as a workaround, to keep the powers in her original body? Fuinjutsu is pretty powerful if used right.
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MarceloSaraivaDoming

Thanks for adding my story

MarceloSaraivaDoming

@ SirSplunk  i have many DXD fanfics each with a different idea
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MarceloSaraivaDoming

@ MarceloSaraivaDoming  Thank you
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SirSplunk

@MarceloSaraivaDoming No problem. They're a bit of refreshing take on DxD stories. Or, at least from my experience.
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