Sir_Ottin

Successfully proofread and edited chapter 1 of cannon fodder, omw to chapter 2

Sir_Ottin

Okay so, I'm starting to consider some stuff. Rewriting cannon fodder hasn't been working out as id hopes, because the rewrite changes way to many things and I think the original is a lot more simpler and easier to enjoy. So instead of a rewrite, I'm thinking of just proofreading everything and polishing it up instead(I'll resist the urge to add unnecessary details). I've also been considering making a sort of comic version of the story as well, but its only an idea as of right now, but tell me if you guys would be interested in seeing that, it'll definitely have to be a passion project but since I have so much time on my hands, its plausible.

Sir_Ottin

@coeflue thank youuu, ill do a quick first chapter comic as a test and we'll see how it goes from there
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coeflue

@Sir_Ottin we would be interested in seeing that, author! 
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Sir_Ottin

votes are in, mermaid

Bluin333

YAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!  ₍₍⚞(˶>ᗜ<˶)⚟⁾⁾ ✨
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Bluin333

YAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!  ₍₍⚞(˶>ᗜ<˶)⚟⁾⁾ ✨
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Sir_Ottin

if you guys enjoy my stories, consider supporting me on ko fi!!

BichieLuna

Hallo author ottin, may I ask when there would be an update about (cannon fodder too lazy to act?). I really like this story of yours, please reply. 

Sir_Ottin

@BichieLuna thank you for reading BTW, in hope you enjoyed it  
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Sir_Ottin

@BichieLuna the story is already finished. Unless you're saying you want a sequel, or information on an epilog?
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Sir_Ottin

working on next chapter of eroge game. Im kinda wanting to slow down the amount of lemon a little cause i want to move the plot forward...but i know yall arent here for that lol

Sir_Ottin

@Sir_Ottin YESSS this is the main reason I kinda wanna progress the plot, like I wanna MOVE ON to other creatures getting into Kagami's sheets.
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Bluin333

If u want to reduce the amount of lemon to progress the story a bit faster then that’s perfectly fine to me. I’m especially excited for the mermaid arc I’m OBSESSED with mermaids.
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