TIMEMASTER101
Thoughts on recent chapters?
Sithlord863
RemnantPaladin
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ThomsanAniman
Sup bro
BlackRaptor1
I have written most of the next chapter, I am in the process of writing where Team SPIS meet Junior and the Malachite twins. Roman and Neo have arrived at the club. I am going to have them go into the ‘back room’ to discuss ‘business opportunities’ , intel on Adam’s Vale Branch and the Red Fang, and to introduce themselves as Team Bane’s sister team, Team SPIS. The only questions should be what should be discussed? I know it will mostly be about eliminating competition but who? Should Team SPIS use the Malachite twins as a way to make contact with their mother? I do plan as you will have Team BANE eliminate her and her group, but the Malachite twins will be off limits and be molded to become their own persons and be what they want to be other than organized crime.
Sithlord863
@BlackRaptor1 Excellent ideas, however I think that SPIS should contact Little Miss Malachite on their own (maybe she and her daughters have a bad have a bad relationship or something, which is why they're working for Junior in Vale). As for the business they should discuss with Roman, likely them discussing about the other criminal elements that could get in the way, be it because they're doing more heinous acts on their own, or are actively aligned with Salem, the White Fang, and or Human supremist groups
Fallen_Patriot03
That was another wonderful chapter! Can I borrow some of the elements from the chapter? It'll share the same objective as Team BANE, saving Sienna, restoring the White Fang, and cutting up loose ends with Adam's Fanatical Loyalists. The only difference is that it'll take place at the same time and event as Two Corpos & One Virus and Mistral Chaos (which is 2 days earlier). Not to mention that you'll reading it from the point of view of Blake, Sun, Alex Mercer, and the Evolved (who are former White Fang members) instead of August's.
TIMEMASTER101
@uhlan303 List down details why his writing is shitty. Been 2 years since ive finish his Gate fanfic
TIMEMASTER101
What are your thoughts on the recent chapter? Especially the reveal of Gilgamesh's true identity and backstory, the detail of a certain dragon and conceptual fragments of three certain Empyrean Entities
Then that voice at the end of the chapter?
BlackRaptor1
What do you think of Melanie and Miltia Malachite? Do you think they are loyal to their mother, or they love their mother but are operating in Vale? I want to use the twins as the eyes of ears of the underworld for Team SPIS, to get into their mother, where Team SPIS will use the spiders until Team BANE unknowingly cover their sister's team tracks. My question, is should the twins be eliminated along with the other Spiders or should Team SPIS keep them alive but under their guidance?
Fallen_Patriot03
@Sithlord863 That's understandable. I remember wondering what the Malachite twins were doing in Vale. Either they ran away fro some reason or they were on a task to spy the Xiong Family.
Sithlord863
@BlackRaptor1 Honestly I think we could keep them alive since they're still young and can be molded for a better purpose than just running in a criminal network
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Oh, I also made my own Version of Arcadia, if your interested in looking.
Fallen_Patriot03
A new chapter has been released
https://www.wattpad.com/story/374578069?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=Fallen_Patriot03