Sithlord863

@warking57 Yes, working on the next chapter now

@Sithlord863 God bless the United States of America! 250th year of the USA! From Vietnam.

@ryandunhamwitchking You too dude, and thanks for the suggestion!

@Sithlord863  Yeah those scenes are so satisfying and you get chills when Michaela’s that speech and was the moment he got his spine and will build on to it and he’ll roast those corrupt politicians and become a more effective wartime leader. I will add a part where Michael says he hasn’t been the best sometimes but the best they got and will step up and make up for his own shortfalls and will leader with a more Stoney footing. He’s charisma that’s already in the middle will rise, and his own abilities as a leader will strengthen in the coming chapter(s).
            
            As people do get their he isn’t, it’s going to hit the fan combined with science and technology, and I just loved the scene I wrote with John Tovey and Jozef Bartosik. The royal family is going to get the biggest shock ever eventually when they realize what they did and who they’re facing.not to mention their criminal decision to do all the things they did to take over the world

@Raival904 The speeches were fantastic too! My other favorite scene is Michael realizing just how much he royally underestimated the evil of the Phoenix Empire, and has finally started growing in the spine he'll need to beat them back into the dirt, where they belong. And once people in the Confederation start realizing they have bending, shit is going to start hitting the fan really fast! I can see it now, the Airbenders will return with a vengeance, and my OC leading a small team of elite Airbendering Marines to become a nightmare for the Empire and the royal family!!!

@Sithlord863 oh ho ho yeah you bet he will have a heart attack! And here comes the Air Force, Iowa, Vanguard, Zieten, Prinz Heinrich, Texas, and Bretagne! Surprised riding comment around in that area and Rear Admiral Jǒzef Bartosik’s daring rescue mission and avengence. I’ve just sorted working on correcting present tense to past tense and will fix up some plot points as I go. It shout take too long at all.
            
            What was your favorite parts of Capitol Hall scene too and other scenes? I like Eisenhower’s and Michael’s speeches. And I liked his character development on one part, but I feel that the lead up to it needs work.

@Sithlord863 ah that’s what happened I get it

@Raival904 Dinner and babysitting for my older sister

@Sithlord863 why couldn’t you earlier?

@bubbadubbacouzens Yes, currently working on the next chapter