Ok so I need to write a poem for school and I would like it if you guys would tell me what you think of this one
The Phoenix
Left as an ember, returned as a flame
Fire's shelter, Ice's bane
With wings of fire, it rules the sky
Only once in your life, may you see it fly
For after a thousand years it is destined to crash,
It's burning form reduced to ash
But fear not, this creature has more in store
It's flaming wings will grace the earth once more