Sj132812

Hii  lovelies!! I just edited my character intro.Go check it out when you can

Eeyoremylove

Hii, here to give you a feedback on your book like you asked me to. I'm gonna be honest and please don't it too seriously. This is your first book and you're facing the struggles as all new writers are. But don't let that stop you, continue writing I'm sure with your motivation and good thinking you're just gonna progress. Just a piece of advice don't rush it too much♡ Hope I didn't offend you, book is very good for a beginner so go girl♡ 

Sj132812

@Eeyoremylove Im not offended dw girl but thank you for the feedback
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Sj132812

The twisted series is becoming a Netflix show! Who's exited? If you haven't hear the news go check out Ana Huang  the news is one there☆

Eeyoremylove

@Sj132812 only excited if the cast is gonna be as tiktok says and Sophia La Corte as Julss
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Sj132812

If you haven't read the twisted series it okay but If you have you might understand what I'm talking about either way continue reading if you want.
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          So I'm currently reading Twisted Love.Tell me why Ava and Alex are so damn Delulu!? Like Alex for exaple:"She's mine.She just doesn't know it yet." Sir what?
          
          Ava: I should have been terrified by the leashed Violence flickering inthe car,but I felt oddly safe.I always felt safe with him.
          
          Mind you she's thinking this after Alex bashes her exes head in and says to her:"I will destroy him.Everything he has ever touched,Everyone he has ever love.I will ruin them until they are nothing but a pile of ash at your feet." 
          
          WTH 

Sj132812

@Eeyoremylove He is the biggest ick like boy get a life a real one 
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Eeyoremylove

@Sj132812 I was tolerating it through the book cause it wasn't that bad and then I read the bonus scene that everyone was saying it was SO SPICY AND PERFECT, I ABSOLUTELY HATED IT, I live Ana but the scene hell no. I hate it so so much, Alex gave me such an ick there that I can no longer read twisted love
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