@StarGazer11
uuummm....sorry for not knowing about Natsumi's work,i did not know,i just started a month ago i guess and not checking other peoples work,i made this idiotically,i just deleted all of it since it's wrong so if your a friend of Natsumi can you please say my sorry to her?since i can't find her,and i am not that bad in English,but i guess I'll take your comment about my wrong grammars and punctuations in the novel,and now I'm making another one,this one is dedicated to my life,love life and my friends,and sorry again
P.S.
sorry and please send my message to Natsumi that I'm sorry for not knowing anything about it,and can you please tell your name?the one who sent this message,thanks for the honest comment and if it's ok can you help me with my novel?the new one is about me and my friends...^_^