SkillfulHijinks

me when i. the hijinks!!! insane.
          	
          	
          	
          	
          	
          	
          	
          	um yeah respawned is... happening. at some point this year i think

SkillfulHijinks

me when I lie
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SkillfulHijinks

Mermaid sabre real???? Really????
          
          No way!!
          
          Not me forgetting i claimed this au and have several chapters already written!! Totally!!!!!!
          
          
          
          New fanfic coming soon lol :]

SkillfulHijinks

@LoneRanger253 :]
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LoneRanger253

@FluffyLavenderClouds Hehehe I know what it is :3
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SkillfulHijinks

@AmyOGrady6 probably some time next week once im done procrastinating making a cover, I'll try to get it out by Thursday :]
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SkillfulHijinks

OK so, I just asking for yalls opinion on this because idk,
          
          So, I've been working on an actually original work for a few hours now, (I'm still getting the whole story done first before I actually start writing it for once lol) and... my writing isn't bad?? Idk why but its SO much better than in respawned. 
          Idk if yall see thistle same way,  but for my fanfics they're just.. ew yucky bad writing alert. Idk if it's because I never plan anything out or if I completely lost motivation at some point while i was improving.
          
          Do yall think that respawned should be rewritten? From the start i mean, ik its not finished yet but it started off as what should've been a very short story, like 3 or 4 chapters, and then people started reading it and it just felt wrong to stop it because???. Idk. I've kind of been throwing more and more random plot I have thought out and hoping it's fine.
          
          So, yeah, I'd like someone's opinion.

PH0EN1Xx

@FluffyLavenderClouds no problem dude :)
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SkillfulHijinks

@PH0EN1Xx Thanks a ton! :)
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PH0EN1Xx

@FluffyLavenderClouds try looking through the story, find a bit you don't like, separate it into a new unpublished part and then alter it until you like it.
            
            If it's a majority of the story that you find you dislike, you can consider leaving it up as a 'look how far I've grown' kind of thing
            
            If you like the majority, then try what i originally suggested 
            
            Hope this helps
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SkillfulHijinks

Heyyy quick question yall,  would you read a slice of life style oc thingy if I made it? I've had it on my mind for a few months now, but am not sure if anyone would read it.
          Basic concept is, 4 main characters live out in a giant abandoned forest (with some guests every now and then) and do stuff. Main characters are
          
          Rose, half sheep single mother, trying to care for two kids and roommate/adopted sibling while also running from the law
          
          Suumi, local amnesiac robot with a whole lot of surpessed mental issues
          
          Kacy, 11 year old demon rose found on the side of the road in a box, along with her twin brother
          
          Kyle, kacys twin brother, who is an aspiring Fisher
          
          Yeah, just let me know what you think of it.

Kathlyn_145

Hmm it sounds interesting I would read
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