SkillfulHijinks

⨖ ⨀⩷ ⫪⩳ ⨂⩳⩳⪇... ⨀⨂⫭┶⨀⪇⪇⅌.... ⨖⫭⫪ ⨀⨁⫪⩳⪇┶⫭⨅⪇⅌ ⨁⩳⩵⪘⨅⫙⫪ ⫙⨅⨀⪇⪇⅌. 
          	 
          	⨀⩵⅌↕⨀⅌⫪, ⫭⨓⨖⫪ ⨖⫪ ⨂⨀⪇⪇⨅⨃ ⨉⪇⩳⪘⩳⨖⩵. ⫭⨓⨅⫙⨅ ⨖⫪ ⩵⩳ ↕⨀⅌ ⫭⩳ ⨃⨅⨂⩳⨃⨅ ⫭⨓⨖⫪ ⨁┶⫭!!! ↕⩳⩵⫭ ⫪⫭⩳⫸ ⩷⨅ >:)

SkillfulHijinks

⨖ ⨀⩷ ⫪⩳ ⨂⩳⩳⪇... ⨀⨂⫭┶⨀⪇⪇⅌.... ⨖⫭⫪ ⨀⨁⫪⩳⪇┶⫭⨅⪇⅌ ⨁⩳⩵⪘⨅⫙⫪ ⫙⨅⨀⪇⪇⅌. 
           
          ⨀⩵⅌↕⨀⅌⫪, ⫭⨓⨖⫪ ⨖⫪ ⨂⨀⪇⪇⨅⨃ ⨉⪇⩳⪘⩳⨖⩵. ⫭⨓⨅⫙⨅ ⨖⫪ ⩵⩳ ↕⨀⅌ ⫭⩳ ⨃⨅⨂⩳⨃⨅ ⫭⨓⨖⫪ ⨁┶⫭!!! ↕⩳⩵⫭ ⫪⫭⩳⫸ ⩷⨅ >:)

SkillfulHijinks

Mermaid sabre real???? Really????
          
          No way!!
          
          Not me forgetting i claimed this au and have several chapters already written!! Totally!!!!!!
          
          
          
          New fanfic coming soon lol :]

LoneRanger253

@FluffyLavenderClouds Hehehe I know what it is :3
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SkillfulHijinks

@AmyOGrady6 probably some time next week once im done procrastinating making a cover, I'll try to get it out by Thursday :]
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SkillfulHijinks

OK so, I just asking for yalls opinion on this because idk,
          
          So, I've been working on an actually original work for a few hours now, (I'm still getting the whole story done first before I actually start writing it for once lol) and... my writing isn't bad?? Idk why but its SO much better than in respawned. 
          Idk if yall see thistle same way,  but for my fanfics they're just.. ew yucky bad writing alert. Idk if it's because I never plan anything out or if I completely lost motivation at some point while i was improving.
          
          Do yall think that respawned should be rewritten? From the start i mean, ik its not finished yet but it started off as what should've been a very short story, like 3 or 4 chapters, and then people started reading it and it just felt wrong to stop it because???. Idk. I've kind of been throwing more and more random plot I have thought out and hoping it's fine.
          
          So, yeah, I'd like someone's opinion.

PH0EN1Xx

@FluffyLavenderClouds try looking through the story, find a bit you don't like, separate it into a new unpublished part and then alter it until you like it.
            
            If it's a majority of the story that you find you dislike, you can consider leaving it up as a 'look how far I've grown' kind of thing
            
            If you like the majority, then try what i originally suggested 
            
            Hope this helps
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