Skippa109

@mymonkeyjunk Thanks! I am flatered that you became a fan :)
          	I'm from Oz aswell...Down in good old Melbourne...
          	Did you read my story? Or was it just a random add?

Aesthextics

Hi, i'm sorry for barging into your board like this and please forgive this spammer... I'm self promoting my best friends book, The Conquest of Power to every wattpader i see. I don't expect you to read it, but please give it a shot and see if you like it. 
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/2898627-the-conquest-of-power-watty-awards-2012-t
          
          Fanning to make up for this spam. Don't worry, unfanning is to much of a trouble for this lazy person. Haha. I'm not forcing but because 
           and her other friend are having a race to see who gets more reads at the end of April and Im helping her promote, your help is much appreciated. And if you can't read for some specific reason, the least you can do is fan her. She herself is busy promoting and I doubt she wont fan back. If you want her to read your books, just PM her! Ill gladly read yours too if you read hers. Thanks!

Gregcarr

Hi Skippa, I really appreciate the feedback. I'm glad that you thought that piece would be good as a song. A lot of what I write is written with a tune in my head as music is such a huge part of my life. It was nice to know that you saw that and it does come through in my work. Thank you again.

Skippa109

@atipper It was my pleasure! I took your advice and made some adjustments to my story. I put his thoughts in italics which really works great thankyou! I re wrote the opening paragraphs with some more descriptive stuff, would you mind giving it another read and let me know what you think? I would seriously appreciate it! Thankyou again for taking the time to help me, I am quite flattered :)