Sky Jade

Well, so far so good. Don't be in a rush to write it, take your time and use your imagination. It will all come together. All the best ma'am.

Hey sis, it's Mahlako. I have read your prologue and so far, I think you should fix your sentence structure. You need more full stops and spaces between the text. So if you are writing something long, have at least two paragraphs. Also, I highly suggest you use uppercase "I" if you want to start a sentence. E.g. I am 26 years old and I love babies. Instead of this, i am 26 years old... 
          This creates soo much confusion when reading and readers may get lost.