Sword Art Online has changed my life. I LOVE SAO. Did I HATE the AFO arc? yes. Was it one of the worst things i’ve ever watched? Also yes. But SAO was peak, GGO was DAMN good, and Alicization arc was PHENOMENAL. I’ve said what i’ve said.
GGO was really good but lowk hated Kirito’s avatar in it but it was a really good arc content wise. I just LOOOVE his original all black beater fit it’s SO PEAK
i thought AFO arc was like too rushed and not a lot of crazy character development happened. it also was annoying for me bcs Asuna was just stuck the whole time and i was like ugh can we hurry up and get a move on and get my baddie girl Asuna OUTTT of there
If anybody is looking for someone to read/critique their stories I would be so incredibly happy to do so!!! Just comment on my message board and I’ll add your book to a reading list for me to do so!
I have up to chapter twenty three fully revised in my book Thorns. I am so excited for everyone to be able to read a much better version of my writing! I believe this book may be good enough to be published someday, so that’s what i’m working towards. I’m in the home stretch of revising the first half of my chapters, and then will be able to complete the final third of the book. So excited for what the future holds
i’m DYING for someone to read and critique my book. I need to know how i should edit it! if anyone wants to do read for reads with critiques i HAPPILY will!!!
I can't dm here anymore as you know, but I also have instagram
I'm fine with posting mine, but I'm fireflight664, you can send me a word like "whispers" to confirm it's you, that way you don't gotta post your insta heree
Hey guys! Even though I’m not finished with the story yet, I was rereadingy earlier chapter of Thorns and realized I needed to do a LOT of revising. There were several plot holes and poorly written parts and confusing and useless scenes and descriptions that I decided before I write the final arcs of the book i would go through and deeply revise every single chapter up to chapter 30 or so. So if you want to give it a reread i’d highly recommend. I’m up to chapter 12 with completed revisions and i’m excited to continue modifying the story!!!