hopethehippie
I posted a new chapter, dear! I hope you enjoy it.
hopethehippie
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Dude, I just read your comment! I totally understand where you're coming from. I was trying really hard to finish the chapter but I definitely didn't elaborate as much as I should've. I read it this morning and thought to myself, "Well, shit, Hope. This is a fucking let down."
I'll either go back and edit it to make it more descriptive or wait until Chapter 16 to describe it through Evelyn's memory. I'm kind of torn between the two. What are your thoughts?
hopethehippie
Thank you! I just wanted to make sure it wasn't a stupid idea. I appreciate your opinion so much and I knew you'd be honest with me, haha.
SkylarTamsin
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@hopethehippie OH that sounds perfect! I've done that myself when writing; I'll leave it with a very vague cliff hanger on one part, and then in the next part I'll elaborate what happens! I'm so glad you thought of that. I wish I'd thought you would think of it, so I wouldn't feel the need to say GIVE ME MORE RIGHT NOW. If it were a book, I would only need to turn the page, and there it would be. <3 Oh, so fucking perfect. Leave it the way it is and elaborate in the next chapter. That's fucking perfect.
hopethehippie
Hey!!! What's up? I haven't heard from you in awhile. I can't wait to read more of your work!
SkylarTamsin
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@hopethehippie Dude, I NEED NEW SHIT FROM YOU! xD I AM DYING. YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MANY TIMES I'VE CHECKED FOR PART 13!!
hopethehippie
I adore your writing! I would love it if you could check out my story "The Codeine Scene". Thank you so much for reading this, and I'm looking forward to more "Better Version of Me"! :)