you may have improve your writing, though I hope you don't stop writing your work! it's really awesome and love your characters. I love how the supportive characters has their own free will like to do what they want rather then doing things to cause full drama making look annoying. I also like how your story isn't always dramatic. to much drama in chapters are.. well.. would burst my patience. you really gave details that plays in the mind rather then skipping them because it was either hard or to embarrassing. I hope you keep up your good works! :) I always look forward on your chapters!