Skymoon6311

Getting up this morning was a struggle, a heavy, suffocating feeling, like an extra body, pinning me to the bed. It froze my muscles as they felt trapped under my duvet. I struggled to breathe under the stress, but a thick, musky odor of unfamiliar sweat suddenly permeated the air, descending on me like fog.
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          	Chap 14 of Mona is posted xxx
          	https://www.wattpad.com/1265969738?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=postToProfile&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create_writer&wp_uname=Skymoon6311

Skymoon6311

Getting up this morning was a struggle, a heavy, suffocating feeling, like an extra body, pinning me to the bed. It froze my muscles as they felt trapped under my duvet. I struggled to breathe under the stress, but a thick, musky odor of unfamiliar sweat suddenly permeated the air, descending on me like fog.
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          Chap 14 of Mona is posted xxx
          https://www.wattpad.com/1265969738?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=postToProfile&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create_writer&wp_uname=Skymoon6311

Skymoon6311

Some pictures slipped out, so I set them all on fire and watched his face burn away until it was nothing but a crisp. They fell from my eyes like dead flies and I only stopped at my favorite ones and my kids' baby photos.
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          Chap 13 of Mona is posted xxx
          https://www.wattpad.com/1337946421?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=postToProfile&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create_writer&wp_uname=Skymoon6311

Skymoon6311

My arms stiffened at his last words. The last time I heard those were from Xavier and that got me tangled up in his web. Where he rained down gifts and money, adding more to his beautiful deception. Like raindrops dripping down a spiderweb and settling like small gems, beautifying the trap to the unsuspecting fly.
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          Chap 11 of Mona was rewritten and published yesterday x 
          https://www.wattpad.com/1283952063?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=postToProfile&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create_writer&wp_uname=Skymoon6311

Skymoon6311

The background was shattered glass that resembled my past, trying to piece them back together but unable to with the misfit pieces. Just like how I can barely piece together whether my tata had genuine love for me or if I was nothing but a replacement for my late mamă.
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          Chap 8 of Mona is now posted xxx
          https://www.wattpad.com/1268558366?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=postToProfile&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create_writer&wp_uname=Skymoon6311

Skymoon6311

I stood in the kitchen while folding clothes into the washing machine. My mind was full of clouds, eyes void of movement and sucked in the dreamy scenery that painted outside the window. An inkling of sunset seeped under the ashy gray clouds that smoked through the darkening sky.
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          Chap 7 of Mona is posted xxx
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Skymoon6311

Does anyone have a bad writing habit that’s difficult for them to break? 
          
          Mine is over describing because I have this belief that my writing is not good enough if it’s too simple XDD

FMClements

@Skymoon6311 - I don't think you over-describe at all. I really like the way you write. It's very visual. I can see what's happening, and it makes me want to read more. Your opening scene was excellent! The bad guys kidnapping the family, the teenage daughter trying to escape through the backyard to get help, and then the hunky guy to the semi-rescue--, her uncle is a piece of  ****! I think it's really good work!
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Skymoon6311

In the midst of the breezy afternoon, I was outside with Mihai and Raiden, dribbling around a ball. Any speck of the sky was shrouded by heavy clouds that gradually darkened with their deep rumbling, looming over us. While heavy thoughts shadowed everything in my mind remained.
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          Chap 6 of Mona is finally posted after months of trying to write hahah. 
          https://www.wattpad.com/1490042453?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=postToProfile&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create_writer&wp_uname=Skymoon6311

Skymoon6311

Hey everyone! Sorry for taking like an unofficial break off here and not being that active :’) but I’m planning to come back here fully, just went into a little slump off reading and writing and have kinda fallen off my creativity 

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@Skymoon6311 Glad you're back! I've been in a bit of a slump myself--life, right? I'm looking forward to getting back into your book!
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pattuck418

@Skymoon6311 that happens. Please don't forget the assignments for the White Tigress Book Club due tomorrow. :)
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