Sleepeyes322
Hi everyone, I have a quick question to ask. It’s more like a poll but oh well. I’m beginning the process of re-writing July Above as I have said I would do because I felt the story wasn’t up to my standards lol. I was thinking of maybe scrapping the whole plot and starting fresh but I wanted to see how you all felt about that. So, should I keep the same plot and characters just give the story a revamp or should I scrap everything, start over and give you all a brand new Jack story? I’m open to both I just wanted to check in before deleting the whole thing and starting fresh. I would appreciate anyone’s input if they see this and feel like weighing in! Thank you so much for your time, ~Mads.
Lyal0721
And if she was family... probably a better way to show their link is that they keep contact but she told them that if they ever mentioned him she will not answer their calls ever again. She still miss all the important dates because she didn't want to see the guy that broke her. But then is not because her mom was being shady and never saying that the guys she considered his brothers didn't even call her. That extra heartbreak directly from her mom...
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Lyal0721
@Sleepeyes322 Okey. This is just my opinion.... kissing someone after having sex and just never explained is unrealistic. Also it supposed to have happend on the beach not on a house, and mom never saying that they where looking for her when is her best friend is weird...Everything is perfect but to be honest I think that him telling her he doesn't really like her and he was just playing because his manager told him he should not have a girlfriend if he want to succeed can be a better separation point. Or he truly having and affair because he wasn't sure if he love her or it was just familiarity and what everyone expected. He knew while doing it that point he really love her but after she saw it all he knew he didn't deserve her forgiveness so never look for her.
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Sleepeyes322
@Kingwulfe Not at all! On Thin Ice is a standalone and does not have any ties to Bad Idea. You can read them in any order you’d like.
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