thanks for the star man; that dialogue thing, if done skillfully it looks pretty cool. Michael Crighton was one person who could pull that off most of the time. ever read sphere?
I hate when people don't separate dialogue out, start a new paragraph per speaker, or mention at the end of speech who was talking.
Back to English Class with you!
Heyy :) I recently started writing a book named " serpentine". Since you have written quiet a lot of books ( that is amazing btw), I assume you are great at writing and I would deeply appreciate if you would give me some feedback on my book.