It's definitely getting better. I think a bit more clarity would be good. Sometimes it seems like you leave out too much when you're trying to add suspense and instead of being suspenseful it ends up just being confusing. Altogether though it's not bad, keep up the good work :)
Hi! Can you please follow me back?
And another favor :) please read my first wattpad story http://www.wattpad.com/39079121-to-witness-a-miracle and please do vote or just comment... it would really mean so much to me.
HEYY-OOOH!!!!!!
Good afternoon my lovelies. I know I'm hella inconsistent in all things wattpad but I'd like to let you all know I've added a chapter to The Named and I've begun seriously revamping Unravelled cuz let's face it, it's kinda shit atm.
Anyway, hope you all had a spook-tastic halloween and be sure to check out The Named and vote!
It's definitely getting better. I think a bit more clarity would be good. Sometimes it seems like you leave out too much when you're trying to add suspense and instead of being suspenseful it ends up just being confusing. Altogether though it's not bad, keep up the good work :)
Oh, what was that? Two chapters in one week? That's right folks. I'm back and I'm ready to go. Reread if you have to, I understand, I've taken way too long to keep The Named going, but hey, better late than never right? Anyway, go check out Chapter 15: Rescue
@LostDMBFiles OH nice, I'm in Germany for the year but when I'm home I'm (obviously) in the Seattle area. Idaho is an interesting place though. I spent the last few summers traipsing around a bit in Northern Idaho.... very very interesting place.. lol
@LostDMBFiles Ah, yeah, I've kind of been all over but my heart is always in Washington. I lived in San Antonio for a few months as a kid though. I remember it being very hot, and crazy heavy rain that would just start pouring down without warning.
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