flowersftroses
Hi, @SlytherinDevil! My friend has published a new book and she needs some feedback, so I was wondering if you could give it a read and tell her what you think. Thanks! You can find it here: https://my.w.tt/tM3shAzbm3
SlytherinDevil476
@flowersftroses Thought it was really cool, to add 5o it a bit more and set the scene she could describe more, but otherwise it flowed really well and gripped me in the first paragraph!