@Dax_Riddle22445 thank you! i completely abandend my first book bc i saw i got waaaaaaaay off my original plot sooooooooo that is now..... well..... a.....i actually have no idea.... and i am working on the second part of my second book! ..... i just need my brain too function after a day in school with wild animals as class mates......... well anyways.... talk to you later!
Hi it's Midnight66966 or known as Alyssa. I see really good ideas you just need to express them. At least you have a computer cause I have to type on a phone. But anyway I feel like you should change people's perspective like it could be Draco then Harry or keep going on Harry. The point is to express the characters feelings and write down all the juciy details.
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