Miss Carter

Trying to resolve friendship problems in fics is harddddd. 

Hi hello everyone. If anyone who reads my neymar fic sees this message, please contemplate something with me. I started that fic when i was in high school (around 17-18 age) and i was not the most mature. Now i am at a big age when i start finding my writing inadequate and cringe at some point. I am also frustrated with myself for rushing the romance. I also feel like i victimized him way too much. I could have done a lot better at ending his previous relationship  and explored more of his broken bond with kylian and their supposed make-up. Right now, i feel like deleting the whole thing and revamping the whole fic. What do you think i should do? Because the inconsistency with that fic is scratching my brain in the worst way. Don't get me started on diction mistakes i made. So please, help

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When you will update ,for your two stories ?

i neeeeeeeed an update on swim its soooo good

Thanks for the follow! I really appreciate it! I'm so glad you've been enjoying my stories so far! 
           
          Thanks again!
           
          Happy Reading,
           
          DLA

Girl update when 

 UPDATE PLEASEEEE

Are you going to update Swim?

The new wattpad comment section scared tf out of me