SmartNerdAlex

Chapter 12 is out and revised! I also took a part from Chapter 11, so if you also see Lumos's and Kazuma's conversation again, that's why. Please, read it and tell me if I should do anything differently next. Thank you for reading and being patient with me! Have a nice day.

SmartNerdAlex

Chapter 12 is out and revised! I also took a part from Chapter 11, so if you also see Lumos's and Kazuma's conversation again, that's why. Please, read it and tell me if I should do anything differently next. Thank you for reading and being patient with me! Have a nice day.

SmartNerdAlex

Never mind, the 13th chapter wasn't deleted! I republished it, and because I have a month off of school, revisions will come soon. Also, I've made a decision- Chapter 12 will be split into two. However, the second part will come after Chapter 13, so if you see Kazuma getting captured again, that's why. (I didn't edit it yet- THAT will also be coming soon.) Have a wonderful Coronavirus-filled week!

SmartNerdAlex

So, I really don't know what happened, but the 13th chapter got deleted. It is  now unpublished. I also have been on a serious kick over the past month and have been revising my previous chapters like crazy, so you don't have to read them, I've just been adding more detail and fixing plot holes. (I also have to rewrite that chapter. Hooray.) Just so you know!

SmartNerdAlex

Ahhh, I know it's been months since I last updated! I'm sorry! I'm pretty busy with schoolwork, and I have a pretty dense writer's block. I have managed to conjure an idea for the next chapter, and I'm currently working on making it sound less terrible right now, so expect an update soon. I'll try to be done by the end of this month. Have a great day!

SmartNerdAlex

I've finally got a half-decent idea for my next chapter! I'm working on the draft right now. I'll try to publish it by Saturday. (If I don't, feel free to bombard me with messages. I should have plenty of time this week to finish it.) Have a great day!

SmartNerdAlex

I'm going on Wednesday
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crimson_fable

@SmartNerdAlex u know we have orientation thursday right?
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SmartNerdAlex

So, I'm pretty much done with the revisions. I might revise it a bit after this but not by much. Though I didn't make drastic changes like character names and stuff like that, I did fix some important things, so I'd recommend you go back and skim it over. (Also, I just realized that I make my characters pass out way too much. Oops.) Leave a comment saying what you think!