Your book/story is a very interesting book i would very much like to read futher pages and find out what happeneds. Yes you do have errors here and there but the story is too good for it to be a problem. I love the culture these people have its weird and savage i love thatyour book is very nice. Im not good with words but i jusy wanted to say thank u for writing the book it kept me entertained and its very good.~ariie
Dawnslave is such an amazing book!!!!
Please keep writing it and don't stop until its finished
I am defiantly recommending it so please keep up the updates!!!!