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I love your first chapter so far. (⁠人⁠ ⁠•͈⁠ᴗ⁠•͈⁠) I have not much to say about your writing because you write SO well, but grammar rules. When writing 'i, i'm, i've'; don't forget to capitalize the "I" broski (⁠｡⁠•̀⁠ᴗ⁠-⁠)⁠✧ and when beginning a paragraph or sentence, capitalize the first letter AND after a period. Anyways that's all, don't forget to edit your works before publishing it (I made that mistake once and had so much autocorrect's..) OKAY LABYUUU bye byeee.