SniperRabbit

Oh my gosh!!! My peeps! I've missed you all so much, my computer died so long ago but I'm finally back!!! H*ll yeah I'm back and I'm gonna make up for my absence! ! !

ty for the votes xx

@politicalfairies what?

ATTENTION EVERYONE FOLLOWING THIS ACCOUNT : THE OWNER OF THIS ACCOUNT IS A HOMOPHOBE AND BELIEVES THAT GAY PEOPLE HAVE NO MORA BOUNDARIES.

Wow you sure speak your mind!     
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@BrokenRaven  I really don't go through your chapters  like that I just read them and because I've never read them before I tend to notice mistakes. As for constructive criticism. Well I'll have my brother read it and see what he thinks but my mind wasn't thinking of it like that as I read it the first time. I'll see what we can come up with. And I know you want constructive criticism, but right now I think I should mention that I think the story is coming along great. Very interesting. Also sorry for taking two months to get back to you but I was kind of new to wattpad and didn't know about this part.  :-) 

Hey there, I appreciate all the spelling and grammar comments you've put on my chapters and I am fully aware that the large majority of chapters posted are not proofread but could you perhaps give me some constructive criticism? I mean if you're going through my chapters with a fine tooth comb then could you point out what I can do better? That would be greatly appreciated thank you!