Snsd12345

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I just read a story, and I'm not going to lie. It was a good story but I'm not going to recommend it. I get it in every state we have our not so nice looking neighborhoods. But when did we, as a writing community allow the words "nigga", and "nigger" to be in our stories. Not everyone from as people say, "from that side of the tracks", speaks like that. I can say that because for years that's how my family and I lived. We're from the east side of DC. We were raised to use proper grammar. I get it you want to show people how they talk, but for every other word to be nigga. That is too much. 
          	We get upset when people call is that, but we give them a reason to. We call our friends that and when we greet each other.  It's not "hey how are you?" No instead it's, "hey my nigga". What the hell. 
          	I find it crazy that we as African Americans would call each other that. I thought we were above that. 
          	Just because rappers use it doesn't mean we have to use it. 
          	Times have changed. And instead of going forward, were going backwards. I don't like seeing my people refer to each other in such a manner. 
          	I just had to get this off my chest. I'm so ashamed of of how we as a writing community will allow such degrading words be in our stories. 
          	I know I use bitch and slut, and I shouldn't and I'm working on that. But I would never use harmful words even if they are not meant to be hurtful in my stories. I will not read or follow people who have no respect for themselves.

Snsd12345

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I just read a story, and I'm not going to lie. It was a good story but I'm not going to recommend it. I get it in every state we have our not so nice looking neighborhoods. But when did we, as a writing community allow the words "nigga", and "nigger" to be in our stories. Not everyone from as people say, "from that side of the tracks", speaks like that. I can say that because for years that's how my family and I lived. We're from the east side of DC. We were raised to use proper grammar. I get it you want to show people how they talk, but for every other word to be nigga. That is too much. 
          We get upset when people call is that, but we give them a reason to. We call our friends that and when we greet each other.  It's not "hey how are you?" No instead it's, "hey my nigga". What the hell. 
          I find it crazy that we as African Americans would call each other that. I thought we were above that. 
          Just because rappers use it doesn't mean we have to use it. 
          Times have changed. And instead of going forward, were going backwards. I don't like seeing my people refer to each other in such a manner. 
          I just had to get this off my chest. I'm so ashamed of of how we as a writing community will allow such degrading words be in our stories. 
          I know I use bitch and slut, and I shouldn't and I'm working on that. But I would never use harmful words even if they are not meant to be hurtful in my stories. I will not read or follow people who have no respect for themselves.

KamyTipan

Why did you take down My Dominators! It was really good!

Snsd12345

@KamyTipan I reposted it on my profile if you would like to check it out. You'll notice some changes. It's title key to their hearts.
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KamyTipan

@KamyTipan  Okay cool! It was really good doe! So good luck with it!!
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Snsd12345

Anyone else have parents who are judging them, and constantly putting them down? PM me, and we can chat and find ways to tell our parents how we feel and hopefully they will listen and not think were being disrespectful. Or as my mother put it. " An ungrateful little bitch".

Snsd12345

Hey guys can you suggest some actually good stories to read. That are completed. Not some pathetic cliche story. Believe me when I say I will tell you if the story is cliche, pathetic and poorly written. So good luck. The first person to give me a good story will have the next chapter dedicated to them.

chrishaighUK

@Submissive123  You want a good story, sexy, fun, different? Try Swap With Me.
             http://www.wattpad.com/story/12020628-swap-with-me
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Snsd12345

I finally got my laptop fixed so I can now upload once again, and I will be taking down some stories, do not worry I will put them back up. I looked over my work and I was disappointed with what I saw. There was so much improper grammar and misspelled words. You guys deserve better. So I will be taking down Witch Child, My  Dark Past, and My Dominators. I need to re-do a lot of the work and wording. Especially for My Dominators. The story did not make sense in my head and I know for a fact it will not make sense on here. Again I am so sorry for the inconvenience and the really long wait.