@tamlaura1 It's an opinion, not another hateful comment. I'm still reading your story, my comment isn't that all negative, come on. You write, expect the best and the worst. I get nasty comments, I just ignore them and continue writing, some I take into consideration though.
@tamlaura1 It's not trashing. I was wondering why your characters jumped into conclusions so fast. Know what I mean? I do love the story and it's very catchy.